Group140

= In-Class Exercise = **1.** **Look at the following quotation. Highlight or underline the words/phrases that you need to avoid**.

"Downlut believes the Brady bill __trespasses on the rights of law-abiding citizens__, and is therefore __inconsistent with the Constitution__, because it __imposes a waiting period on exercising the right to own guns."__

Source: Bender, David L. "Can Controlling Guns Control Crime?" //Crime and Criminals:// //Opposing Viewpoints//. Ed. Paul A. Winters. San Diego: Greenhaven, 1995. 137-73. Print. (Quote from page 137)

**2.** **Now list below the ideas that you will include**.
 * Brady Bill- Downlut style
 * Violates the rights of citizens
 * Does not agree with the constitution
 * Enforces a waiting period on the right to own guns


 * 3. Next, __set aside the original__ and write a paraphrase. **

Downlut thinks the Brady Bill violates the laws of citizens by it enforces a waiting period on the right to own guns and that does not agree with the constitution(Bender 137).
 * 4. Compare your paraphrase with original above. **
 * 1) Check for the underlined words to make sure you have avoided them
 * 2) Check for ideas to make sure you have included them
 * 3) Check to make sure you have used different vocabulary and different sentence structure
 * 4) Acknowledge source using a parenthetical reference