Group129

= In-Class Exercise = **1.** **Look at the following quotation. Highlight or underline the words/phrases that you need to avoid**.

"Downlut believes the Brady bill __trespasses__ on the rights of __law-abiding citizens__, and is therefore __inconsistent__ with the Constitution, because it imposes a waiting period on exercising the right to own guns."

Source: Bender, David L. "Can Controlling Guns Control Crime?" //Crime and Criminals:// //Opposing Viewpoints//. Ed. Paul A. Winters. San Diego: Greenhaven, 1995. 137-73. Print. (Quote from page 137)

**2.** **Now list below the ideas that you will include**. Downlut- the rule of Brady bill is going beyond right of law-abiding citizens and Constitution. it creates waiting period for buying guns.

Downlut thinks the rule of Brady bill is going beyond the right of law-abiding citizens and Constitution since it creases waiting period of buying guns.
 * 3. Next, __set aside the original__ and write a paraphrase. **


 * 4. Compare your paraphrase with original above. **
 * 1) Check for the underlined words to make sure you have avoided them
 * 2) Check for ideas to make sure you have included them
 * 3) Check to make sure you have used different vocabulary and different sentence structure
 * 4) Acknowledge source using a parenthetical reference