Group105

= In-Class Exercise = **1.** **Look at the following quotation. Highlight or underline the words/phrases that you need to avoid**.

"Downlut believes the Brady bill __trespasses on the rights of law-abiding__ citizens, and is __therefore inconsistent__ with the Constitution, because it __imposes a waiting period on exercising__ the right to own guns."

Source: Bender, David L. "Can Controlling Guns Control Crime?" //Crime and Criminals:// //Opposing Viewpoints//. Ed. Paul A. Winters. San Diego: Greenhaven, 1995. 137-73. Print. (Quote from page 137)

**2.** **Now list below the ideas that you will include**.

Downlut Not towards Brady bill Goes Against the Someone who follows the law. Doesn't follow the constitution Puts a waiting time on having the rights to own guns. Downlut, who does not believe the Brady Bill is appropriate, thinks the bill goes against people who follow the law, and is not linked to the constitution correctly because it puts a waiting time on having the rights to own a gun.(Bender 137)
 * 3. Next, __set aside the original__ and write a paraphrase. **


 * 4. Compare your paraphrase with original above. **
 * 1) Check for the underlined words to make sure you have avoided them
 * 2) Check for ideas to make sure you have included them
 * 3) Check to make sure you have used different vocabulary and different sentence structure
 * 4) Acknowledge source using a parenthetical reference